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Alex – Story Mapper – chp.14-15

Posted by: Alex | April 15, 2009 | 6 Comments |

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I think Dr.Barnes’s plan of firing Mr.Larson will work initially , but Cara and her freinds will prove to Dr.Barnes that Mr.Larson was a good teacher.

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6 Comments

  1. By: ambrosec on April 22, 2009 at 8:20 am      

    Do you think Mr. Larson is a good teacher? Would you like to be in his class?

  2. By: wolfc on April 23, 2009 at 8:25 am      

    i really liked your diery entry and your prediction

  3. By: Nikki on April 23, 2009 at 8:31 am      

    Hey Alex! I think you gave alot of information and description! I do think you should slow down and cut down on the word THEN. Maybe you could use the words also, or after, or maybe even later. But otherwise THAT WAS GREAT! :D

  4. By: Alex on April 23, 2009 at 8:31 am      

    Yes,Mrs.Ambrose,I think Mr.Larson is a good teacher, because he teaches his kids about how the newspaper works and lets them make their own newspaper,and do lots of activitys.

    That’s why I would like to be in his class.

  5. By: Erin on April 23, 2009 at 8:38 am      

    Good Job, Alex! :)

  6. By: Saverio on April 23, 2009 at 8:40 am      

    WOW!!! You used lots of discription.I have to say that was really good, and it was very clear.
    SOOOOOOOOO…Yeah NICE! :D

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