Chapters 1 and 2 sm
- If I could advertise for a mail mom her qualities would be a good cook,funny and nice. All the things my mom has. A good cook because I could be picky sometimes. Funny because I want a mom with a sense of humor. Nice because I don’t like a mean mom.Those are some qualities I want a mail mom to have!
- Does my mom have those qualities? My mom totally has those qualities!My mom is nice,funny and a great cook!My mom does have those qualities!
- Some charactistics my mail order mom should not have is being mean, a bad cook and does not love me. Mean because she will make me do everything. A bad cook because I don’t like to eat bad things. Does not love me because I would be sad. Those are somethings my mail order mom can not have!
- Does my mom have those qualities? No, not at all. My mom is the best. She will never have those qualities. My mom does not have those qualities.
Team 20 sm
May 8th, 2008 at 9:54 am
I really liked your journal entry! I thought you did a good job of answering the questions and had great details.
Mrs. H:)
May 8th, 2008 at 1:51 pm
I liked your writing and I am lucky because my mom is a good cook too. I’m a little bit of a picky eater too. My favorite meal is New England Clam Chowder.
May 8th, 2008 at 9:42 pm
I thought this was a great journal entry because you used details and examples to support what you said.
Mrs. Houck:)
May 9th, 2008 at 1:52 pm
I realy liked your journal entry and the details you put in!