Chapters 3 & 4 RR
Yuck! The sand keeps getting in my mouth. It’s really fun at the beach. Most of the time at the beach it’ll have seagulls, sand, waves and palm trees. Do you hear that, that’s the kids playing in the soft sand. Most of the time people bring towels so they can sit on them. I could almost smell the fish and seaweed. Well, I hope you go to the beach soon.
May 13th, 2008 at 9:56 am
wow i really like how you started out with a sound like yuck! .And also i loved your opening and closing