Chapters 3 & 4 RR
Wow, do you see that? It’s a large body of water with sand. It’s the beach! Let’s start off with what you see. You see people surfing, eating popsicles, crabs, lobsters, jellyfish, and sometimes if you’re lucky… sharks (when you’re on the beach of course, looking out into the salty water). You wouldn’t want to see a shark while you were still in the water 
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Okay, now what do you hear? You hear the beautiful ocean waves crashing, people bringing their radio to play music, the squawking of seagulls, and people laughing, having the best time of their lives.
Next, you can feel the hot sand on your feet on a beautiful day.
You can smell many things too like salt water and white suntan lotion.
Finally, I know you like to eat so on some hot beaches, you can get ice cream, hot dogs, and french fries! I can’t forget popsicles!Well, I hope to see you at the beach soon!
May 13th, 2008 at 9:55 am
I liked the part when you said ” if you’re lucky you’ll see sharks”. I especially loved when you said “I know you like to eat on hot beaches” and named the foods you can eat there.