Chapters 3 and 4
At the beach, you can hear, smell, feel, see, and taste alot of things. Here are some things you can see at the beach. you can see the seagulls hovering above you. You can see lots of people laying on thier beach towls or playing in the nice, cool water. you can also see lots of other things.
Now here are some things you can hear at the beach.You can hear boats vrooming by in the water. you can hear waves crashing on the sand. you can also hear airplanes zooming by in the sky.
Here are some things that you can feel. You can feel the sand in between you’re toes and you can feel the suntan lotion rubbing on your skin. Another thing you can feel is your beach towels if you’re laying on it.
The last thing is things you can smell. You can smell the salty, salt water,you can smell the crisp smell of the sand, and you can smell your coconuty suntan lotion. That was my journal entry. Team6 sm
May 12th, 2008 at 1:44 pm
I love some of your details! I liked when you used the word hovering for when you were explaining when seagulls are flying. I also liked when you said you can hear boats ‘vrooming’ by the water! I never thought of boats! Airplanes zooming through the air is painting a hectic scene in my head with these details, I feel like I’m there! Waves crashing on the sand, I see waves creating a whole in the ground, or a gully! I love when you said suntan lotion rubbing against your skin! That is creative! I also loved when said the smell of crisp sand, it told me that the sand was fresh and when you step on it, it makes a crunching sound. Great job!