http://gtpsblogs.org/sarah/2008/05/12/chapters-3-and-4-2/ An online collaborative project Mon, 02 Jun 2008 16:57:04 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 http://gtpsblogs.org/sarah/2008/05/12/chapters-3-and-4-2/comment-page-1/#comment-52 team6 Mon, 12 May 2008 17:44:50 +0000 http://gtpsblogs.org/sarah/2008/05/12/chapters-3-and-4-2/#comment-52 I love some of your details! I liked when you used the word hovering for when you were explaining when seagulls are flying. I also liked when you said you can hear boats 'vrooming' by the water! I never thought of boats! Airplanes zooming through the air is painting a hectic scene in my head with these details, I feel like I'm there! Waves crashing on the sand, I see waves creating a whole in the ground, or a gully! I love when you said suntan lotion rubbing against your skin! That is creative! I also loved when said the smell of crisp sand, it told me that the sand was fresh and when you step on it, it makes a crunching sound. Great job! I love some of your details! I liked when you used the word hovering for when you were explaining when seagulls are flying. I also liked when you said you can hear boats ‘vrooming’ by the water! I never thought of boats! Airplanes zooming through the air is painting a hectic scene in my head with these details, I feel like I’m there! Waves crashing on the sand, I see waves creating a whole in the ground, or a gully! I love when you said suntan lotion rubbing against your skin! That is creative! I also loved when said the smell of crisp sand, it told me that the sand was fresh and when you step on it, it makes a crunching sound. Great job!

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