chapters 3 and 4sm
Ahhhh! The beach is fun. I love listening to the seagulls,and waves crashing ashore. Hearing the wind whistle and people giggling and laughing. That’s what it sounds like at the beach.
At the beach you see seagulls,crystal clear,aqua,salt water. You see people and hot,smooth sand.
When you’re at the beach you smell the salt of the ocean in the wind. You can also smell suntan lotion from all the people.
At the beach you taste sand and salty water when you get it in your mouth. You also taste ice cream. YUM!!!
Lastly you feel excited when you get there. You also feel the sand under your feet. At the beach you feel the waves crashing on you and the ice cream dripping on your hands.
That is what the beach is like when you describe it.
Awwww!! Mom do we have to leave yet? By the way you’ll never want to leave! team 2sm
May 12th, 2008 at 1:46 pm
Wow!! I loved your wrighting about the beach!!!!!! It was so asome.
I also loved the ending how you wrote like you were talking to your mom.
Team,2 , Ashley