Comments for Sarah, Plain and Tall by Patricia MacLachlan

Comment on Chapter 9sm by houckc

houckc — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 16:57:04 +0000

Nice letter, I liked the details you added to make it realistic!
Mrs. H:)

houckc — Mon, 02 Jun 2008 15:44:34 +0000

Is this finished??? Mrs. H:)

team15 — Fri, 23 May 2008 15:03:04 +0000

I liked how you described how she felt

team9 — Fri, 23 May 2008 15:01:39 +0000

I like how you used a sound word at the begining.
I also like how you ended your letter with write back

team5 — Fri, 23 May 2008 15:00:04 +0000

good job writing!

team2 — Fri, 23 May 2008 14:58:26 +0000

That was great now I know how to skateboard!!:)

team6 — Fri, 23 May 2008 14:56:55 +0000

i loved your opening! i liked how you started with one word.you had awesome details.
I remember one time when i was in Epcot it was exactly like that

GREAT WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

team19 — Fri, 23 May 2008 14:56:39 +0000

I think you really said what Sarah was thinking!

team2 — Fri, 23 May 2008 14:56:23 +0000

That was a great detail (I feel as sad as a weeping willow tree)
:):):):)

team17 — Fri, 23 May 2008 14:56:02 +0000