What are you looking forward to most when reading this novel?

Posted by: Mr. Dunn | November 10, 2009 | 15 Comments |

What are your thoughts on the first chapters/pages of your novel? Post your comments here!

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15 Comments

By: teesa on November 9, 2010 at 7:17 pm

I look foward to finding out what Zoe`s plan is, and if it works!!!!
By: brielle on November 10, 2010 at 9:40 am

I am looking forward to see Natile publish her book.I would also like to see her publish more books.Also,i would like the Story School to kind-of be like Frindle. I liked the first chapter and the second and thrid. I can’t wait to she what happens next.
By: Melinda on November 10, 2010 at 9:41 am

I really like the first chapter. It told me a lot about Natalie and what she loves to do. going to write and publish a great book!
By: Tiana on November 10, 2010 at 9:42 am

I really like the first chapter. It caught my attetion and had lots details and told alot about Natalie, this book is of to a great start and I cant wait until the end.
By: Melinda on November 10, 2010 at 5:38 pm

So far the first 3 chapters are great! She’s just started 6th grade so I wonder if they say anything about that? I’m really happy I chosed this book! I hope she tells her mom about the book Natalie wrote, and get it publish!
By: ahearns on November 12, 2010 at 9:44 am

so far i think that natalie will have her dreams come true by her story getting published and she will be rich and famous.
By: jonestay on November 12, 2010 at 9:46 am

Well, the first and second chapter wasn’t interesting. Hopefully it will be like other Andrew Clements book. I sorta think Natalies book will get published and she will get money.╤┴ö
By: mazzataa on November 12, 2010 at 9:52 am

the first chapters arent that intresting but i think it will get more intresting.
By: Yanissa on November 15, 2010 at 9:54 am

What i liked so far is, Natalie’s thinking of finishing her story and trying to get it published!!!
By: Megan on November 15, 2010 at 9:55 am

the first chapter was very intresting because Zoe told Natalie that she had to find out what Ted Geisel so she could do her big idea
By: Jazmin on November 15, 2010 at 9:55 am

The first three chapters were ok but i hope it gets better. I learned a lot about Natalie. Natalie has changed her attitude since her father died. I really learned a lot about her and what she likes to do. I wonder what Zoe’s plan will be. I can’t wait to find out what is going to happen next.
By: Jennifer on November 15, 2010 at 9:56 am

I think the the first chapter was really good I like how the author had alot of deatails about Natalie
By: Kamerin on November 15, 2010 at 9:56 am

I feel bad for Natalie because her father died and she put her books that her father would read to her she must have felt really bad ! ]:
By: jonestay on November 17, 2010 at 9:48 am

Well, this story is ok, i dont think Natalie’s mom would like if she would have a phony name. Also, i think Natalie will get her book published but it seems like she dont really think possitive about it. For Example She thought that know body would like her book even if she published it. Last of all I Zoe is a good role model for Natalie because when Natalie was doubtful about herself Zoe was inspiring to Natalie.
By: Yanissa on November 30, 2010 at 9:45 am

What i’m looking forwords to is Natalie,Zoe, and Mrs.Clayton! I wonder how things are going to go now that they have an adult involved! Maybe they all go to the office together. I also hope Natalie finishes her story and won’t be scared to tell her mom about the book she’s writing.

I LIKE THIS BOOK SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!